*Write a paragraph or two to each peer that begins with this type of prompt: As an outsider to this person/group this is what I think is important about your essay...
Conclude your paragraph with ideas for how this essay could be rounded out...
Focus on the story aspect and emotional connection.
Showing and telling.
Write:
* What are you proudest about in this second draft, or as Lamott would prefer, the 'up draft'? Why?
* What aspects do you think are working well? Why?
* What parts do you think you can enhance or improve upon? Why?
* What is the most important concept/idea (insert own word) that you have learned in either their writing experience or in the interview/discovery experience? What can you take forward personally?
Looking Forward:
Wednesday, October 23 - come prepared to spend class time working on the paper. Let me know if you would care for feedback.
*Topic Tracking for Essay 3
*Topic Tracking for Essay 3
Friday, October 25 - Instructor Copy of Essay 2 uploaded to Assignment section in D2L.
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